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She always trusted the words that he spoke,
She always trusted this heart that was broke,
He always thought life was a mere game,
She always knew he'd never feel the same,
She never even had a chance from the start,
But still she gave him all her breaking heart,
She jumped off of this cliff bound only to fall,
But without jumping we'd never fly at all.
©2007-2009 ~Monkeyfyst
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Author's Comments

Finally... a poem that isn't a self-reflection! No seriously, this is about all of the break-ups that I've seen recently.

EDIT: More break-ups! I've edited this for a dear friend. It kills me to see her hurting. If you don't like this version... too bad!

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:iconod-69one:
I like it

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I have no desire other than to serve........
:iconmonkeyfyst:
Thank you

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"Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a Heaven for?" (Robert Browning)
:iconod-69one:
Kewl :)

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I have no desire other than to serve........
:iconfirefightergurl:
DUDE! this is an awesome poem i believe it to be your best so far keep it up patty!

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Who are you to judge the life that i lead i am not perfect and i do not claim to be but the next time you point a finger you damn well better make sure your hands are clean!
:iconuncencerd-edition:
I like this one alot hehe good work...:)

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I can see the shadow the werry appearance, yet i can't touch nor feel WHY!! :(
:iconwritingangel4eva:
this is awesome i agree with Nettie

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Tired of Hiding. Tired of Seeking. What am I hiding from? What am I seeking? What
:iconmonkeyfyst:
Wow, thanks... I wrote it in like two minutes.

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"Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a Heaven for?" (Robert Browning)
:iconmonkeyfyst:
Thanks

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"Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a Heaven for?" (Robert Browning)
:iconmonkeyfyst:
Wow... I'm getting rave reviews all around for this one. Thanks.

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"Ah, but a man's reach should exceed his grasp, or what's a Heaven for?" (Robert Browning)

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